An expressionless face
And tedious ways,
Shines brightly
When you see things lightly…
A broken heart
and a piercing dart,
Becomes an art
For those who
Lives in star…
From above they see things
From above they see wings,
Wings of love spread in air,
Wings of love making things fair…
But we can’t see this earthly bliss,
We can’t see this fortunate kiss,
Cuz we are busy in materialistic life,
and it is busy in cutting us with a knife…
Zaroorat h is duniya ko pyaar ki. Aur aise kavitaon se hi to aankh bhar aate h aur khul jaate h logon ki.
Really well done!
Very true. Muskan, poems such as these rekindles the yearning for true love, once again!….and to last for ever. Please write more.. all the best.
Thankyou…:):)
When the “earthly bliss” is read in conjunction with a subtle love the whole world is transformed into a divine focus.
Its true…all I wanted to convey from that is this only…we can’t see the love spread by those “wings” Cuz we are busy in earning all these materialistic things which in turn makes our life a living hell as we create an infinite difference in all our relationships…which is so sad..:(
High-classs..!!
Thankyou for your lovely comment:)
from where these poems came from?from your heart? Or you have to work on the words to form that1..?
Its actually both…its just what my present status is like…I just tried to put it in words to take off this load from my head and I ended up writing this poem…m really happy u liked it..:):)
Have a nice day..:):)
present status,u mean “love lost”?
Yes..:(
hmm..looks like based on real incident
Yes it is…
haha!! if 1 has lost then find the other 1!!just kidding but very serious also..
Hey if it is so easy to find it just like that then trust me world would have become a heavenly bliss…:p
hey don’t be so serious ,i knew that,take it easy(about my comment),time will heal your wound..
I was just putting forward my opinion… And seriously Thankyou for talking…:)<3:)
use your name in every situation & chant “muskan! muskan! muskan!”..fit yourself to your name..& always muskurati rahoooooooo!!!
Are u Indian??
haa! koi doubt hi anhi hai .hope aapko hindi samaj aa rahi hogi..yaa phir aapki mothertounge me convertsate karuu?
Hindi samajh kyu ni aayegi…m also indian😁😁
local language bhi hindi hi ahi kya??
Delhi s hu m…hindi and english hi aati h meko😝😂tum kaha s ho?
mai bhi is tharati ka hi prani hu,aur bharat se hu..!!
Hey I know u r indian…gussa kyu ho rhe ho…india m aap kaha s ho??I mean konsi state??
gussa! nahi toh..mauje lagata hai now its moving to “chatting”..so whatsapp is best platform 4 it…what do u think?
Smart way to ask for no..:p:p
hahaha!!!no i can give mine also
To thik h tum do pehle…and den we will talk…
yes surely!!!
reply late mil raha hai kya?
Reply to time par hi mil rha h but abi m watsapp par b active hu😜😂sorry meri taraf s reply late aa rhe h
no .i just asked because my reply is not appearing in many posts from last 10 minutes..
Actually tumhari dp confusing h…sorry bura mat maan na…😜
what is “dp”?
Your display pic
hahahhaa…”photo dikhaya ,toh “pehchan” bura man jayegi”
Hey come on…show your true self…:)
By the way aapne abi tk ni bataya ki aap konsi state s ho..
i always wander from here to there..!!
Why are u a tour guide or something?
job issue..
Ohh ok..
kaneke baad milte hai,no. mila kya?
Nhi mila
nahi mila?..lagta hai site problem hai…
Nopes nhi mila
koi baat nahi mai sms kar deta hoo!
take this1- YouR Mine@skype
“khana” ready hai!! khaneko aao!..
Yaa sure…agar aapki state pata chal gyi to i will come…
haha!! ab app toh meri khhich rahi hooo!
But phir b aapne ni bataya…srsly itni secrecy…:p:v are u on a mission:p :v
haha MI-10000000000
Ye kya h??? MI- 10000000000??
chhodo usko..mai kya kah raha tha mai meraa no. sms kar deta hu..par kis no. pe sms karu??
But meanwhile before meeting/finding the other,you may become the famous poet!!
Haha…I just hope what u say comes true😍😍😘